Sunday, June 29, 2008

The Romantic Murder [A Hockey Murder Mystery] One

On a bright, November day Miriya, Cassie, Sam, Zach, Dj, Amanda, Michael, & Ryan were sitting in the lobby of the Grand hotel, when Amanda’s cell phone rang.
“ Hello?” Amanda said after pushing the send button to answer her phone.
“Yes, is this Amanda?”
“Yeah, who’s this?”
“This is the PDA.”
“Ok?”
“We have a murder case on our hands & only the best detectives will be able to solve it.”
“Right we’re, on it.” Amanda hung up the phone. “Guys to the cars.”
“On it.” Everyone responded as they got up off the chairs they were sitting on. “Miriya, Sam, & Zach, you with me.” Michael said as he started out the door.
“Got it.” The three of them replied.
“Dj, Cassie, & Ryan you with me.” Amanda said once they all reached the sidewalk in front of the hotel.
“Got it.” Everyone got into the two light blue jeeps & they drove to the other side of town. They pulled up to the PDA (Pittsburgh Detective Agency), went in, & walked up to the front desk.
“Good you`re here.” The man who they had spoken to before said.
“What`s our assignment?’ Ryan asked.
“There was a murder of someone you know.”
“Who?” Cassie asked surprised.
“Do any of you know someone named Drew?”
“Drew who?” DJ asked.
“Wait do you mean Drew Fata, Rico`s little brother?” Zach asked.
“Yes.”
“How did it happen?” Miriya asked.
“All that we know is that he was shot in the Wilkes-Barre locker room early this morning.”
“Oh my God.” Miriya replied no short of breath.
“We need you guys to get ready, you need to leave for Wilkes-Barre within the hour.”
“Ok.” Everyone replied. They all went under the counter & to the back. They put on there black uniforms, and their name tags, got their pistols, flashlights, belts with extra magazines, pepper spray, hand cuffs, and their badges.
When they were finished getting their stuff they all went out to the armored van & headed to Wilkes-Barre.

5 comments:

Tay Tay said...

OMG! I love it! I have never read a hockey murder mystery, so this should be interesting! PLEASE WRITE MORE! I LIKE IT ALREADY! I would love to invite you to my blog too, but I have to have your email... my blog is

www.sidfanfic.blogspot.com

It has to send ya a verification, so once I send it to you you should be able to read it!

PLEASE WRITE MORE!

mrsjordanstaal11 said...

my e-mail is sidluver87@verizon.net

And I`m glad you like it. I wrote it in like 7th grade (5 years ago) & I`m editing it now.

Tay Tay said...

I'm glad you put it up! Please post more... haha, I'm hooked!

I love Bill Kaulitz and Sidney Crosby said...

OMG!! dun dun duh!! who did it??? the world may never know

Lauren said...

So I hate to post this on here like this, but I don't know how else to get in touch with her.
TayTay - how do I get invited to be a reader for your Sid and Abe story - I started reading it, but then I went back to find it again and it denied me access
My email is: pens.girl.87@hotmail.com

and that's my blogger ID as well
Thanks!